In this poem, I found myself being chased continuously by the time and everything I have to deal, deal with Dead-line. I feel sandwitched by Time and its limit, as we feel every moment in our real life.
The poet has composed the poem with so much realism that my hat’s off to him.
If a reader finds himself or herself in the feelings of the poem, then I must add, the poem is successful one. And what’s more, Debendra Lal is a poet of that height. He observes the life from close vicinity. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful comment.
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In this poem, I found myself being chased continuously by the time and everything I have to deal, deal with Dead-line. I feel sandwitched by Time and its limit, as we feel every moment in our real life.
The poet has composed the poem with so much realism that my hat’s off to him.
If a reader finds himself or herself in the feelings of the poem, then I must add, the poem is successful one. And what’s more, Debendra Lal is a poet of that height. He observes the life from close vicinity. Thanks a lot for such a wonderful comment.
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